Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, Rolando! I'm glad you felt the tension and urgency of love - it’s such a powerful emotion to capture. I had some reservations about sharing a love poem since it's not something I typically write and felt quite personal. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
I love your way of writing! how clear it is, and how transparent you are. You really know to work with words! Thank you for sharing your art. (And your heart , I guess...)
Thank you so much, Nelly. You just made my day! I used to think that being transparent and fully opening my heart in my writing made me weaker and was a mistake, like a disadvantage that was born with me by default. Now, with the feedback I am getting here these days, I am beginning to feel that this is not the case at all. I think I've only just found the right audience.
I can feel the tension and typical urgency of love in your poem Ana. Thank you for sharing
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, Rolando! I'm glad you felt the tension and urgency of love - it’s such a powerful emotion to capture. I had some reservations about sharing a love poem since it's not something I typically write and felt quite personal. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts!
omgosh wow 😭😭 this is soooo beautiful. passionate, romantic and moving.
I'm so glad you like it, Jennae. Thank you so much.
I love your way of writing! how clear it is, and how transparent you are. You really know to work with words! Thank you for sharing your art. (And your heart , I guess...)
Thank you so much, Nelly. You just made my day! I used to think that being transparent and fully opening my heart in my writing made me weaker and was a mistake, like a disadvantage that was born with me by default. Now, with the feedback I am getting here these days, I am beginning to feel that this is not the case at all. I think I've only just found the right audience.